Door
knobs sealed, but the door is wide open
Across
the dull room, I see a pallid clock
Click,
cluck; it resonates, my breath accompanies
A
crow bellows but I hear nothing.
The
traffic has jammed, honks echoing
People
are cursing, a boy whining
Music
system has meanwhile occupied them
Traffic
police whistling but I hear nothing.
Teens
babbling about unfair life, an escaped notice
Volunteers
persuading and wheedling to join clubs
The
nerve within me convulses, hampering my trod
Chats
are surrounding me but I hear nothing.
Pigeons
combating outside my casement
Fan
rotating noisily, mother beating jowar rotis
Summoning
me to eat, the plastic wavering
Hot
sounds emerging from my belly but I hear nothing.
Time
has turned so rash, neglecting my poor hearing
I
am seventeen, wondering when to snog
Though
I feel not, these days deviating to become indolent.
Flashbacks
are irksome, mending them has been loaded
Wishing
to aid myself but the days have outgrown
Ahead I see, but nothing that I can hear.
Ahead I see, but nothing that I can hear.
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ReplyDeleteGood narration dear..
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ReplyDeleteGood usage of Vocabulary
ReplyDeleteGood Chronology in Narration
Great Work
Thank you so much all.:D
ReplyDeleteThis one is very nice. A good sense of images is conveyed and its easy to imagine the situation presented. Only criticism I might have is that certain words could maybe be replaced with better ones- but that's a minor thing, and a subjective opinion. Overall, I find this quite good.
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